Taking Stock of my work

• I think, I did tell my story very well. I used good detail and explained everyones emotions as well.
• I really checked over my grammar, but of course there was a spelling mistake I missed but caught right before I turned it in.
• I think I can always improve my grammar.
• I always write my ideas down on a piece of paper and put them into a web format and then seeing that helps me write my paper better.
• I write it as a web on a piece of paper, then start writing my paper on the computer. After I finished that I print it out and check over my work and also usually have someone else also look at it.
• They helped me change my title and fix grammar mistakes that I did not see.
• Keep on working on my grammar, and coming up with better titles and introductions.